302. a literary insight to keith's post

A literary insight to Keith's post by Shawn Ng ft. Me.
(The more mean parts are obviously by Shawn)

From the 21 November 2009 post, "looks back with a smile"

"Commencement dinner, it was there for us to experience. Words alone fail to suffice, such intense emotions are not describable in black and white alone."

Intense emotions? What emotions? I didn't feel any, why would you feel them. Tell me you aren't into the wishy washy cheesy "friendship motifs" the dinner was trying to promote.

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"Describing the events of the dinner, that is what anyone in the mood would be posting about now. I do not want this post to be a mere repetition of what has been mentioned by others, that would be meaningless. However, I must add that I do not recall ever feeling this way about HCI before, and I'm glad that we parted the High School in such high spirits."

Why would you be in high spirits because the event, it doesn't make sense. Is it because you spent some time with friends and believed nonsense about how passing Year 4 was "important" and a "huge milestone"? Milestone yes, it's not huge, neither is it particularly important if you're going to (censored).

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"I can't imagine how Liki managed to conjure up that emotional speech of his, but if you sit down and think about it, everything he said in his closing speech was entirely in frank honesty.

Was it even emotional? Perhaps if you excessively think between the lines and mislead yourself.

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"These 4 years have undoubtedly been difficult to say the least, but the fact that everyone has passed through to HCJC is heartwarming. That, I feel, is more than enough."

Is that a line from One Piece? It's filled with melodrama. Did you really (pretentiously) care about everyone and found it a relief?

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"Sometimes in such situations, we are more able to look back on our history. And that I feel is actually of utmost importance."

I don't think you want to look back at yours, and even if you do, you would be looking back at your literature.

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"It is human nature to neglect the small issues in life when focusing on what is ahead of them, most of the times we fail to notice what is most obvious and what is around us."

There are a lot of meticulous people around us.

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"This commencement dinner has had a great impact on my life, as I am sure my readers from HCI will likewise feel."

That's because I rarely dress up like that and eat at a big hotel.

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"When we mix around with the people around us, share the laughter, the joy, embracing the moment with open arms. That’s something we should always cherish."

You shared your knowledge, or rather, unknowledge with us.

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"It is not common to find ourselves in situations as such, but what we do with those situations, that is most vital. If we do not treat treasure what we have, then I don’t think we can say much of ourselves can we? We’ll just be hollow skeletons basking in darkness."

I don't understand the link between treasuring what we have, hollow skeletons, and basking in darkness. Is it some cheesy lines from the lastest Twilight movie?

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"Last night was the night of our lives. I hope to maintain it as such, and perhaps emulate more of these occasions in the years to come."

You are probably the only one who does not want to future to be more exciting. Sounds sadistic.

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"Times like these are what make the world a better place to live in. Grasp them, and never let go."

Freedom comes when you learn to let go, creation comes when you learn to say no. There's no greater power than the power of goodbye. So you must learn to say goodbye, and not grasp them and never gonna give'em up. Some things are better kept as memories.

posted by datf @ 12/02/2009 09:35:00 pm